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    It's an interesting work, certainly modern. I see it as background music to some film documentary on underwater life in particular.
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    I like the distorted part in your electronic piece, I think you could build a full song based only on that. Perhaps starting with a simple rhythm and then using some phase shifting or plainly writing alterations to it to build interesting rhytmical textures. You could also experiment with the level of distortion in that (like you did here already a bit )

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    Thanks for the advice. I incorporated those sounds and others to make it more full. This one is way more trippy version

    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    I definitely think the new version is much stronger. It makes more sense, and flows better, good job!

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    Here is my first orchestral piece, in the works. Still working on the last part and to work out more ideas.

    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    I could've done without the countdown, lol, that hurt my ears! Music sounds interesting though, but I feel like it jumps and ends right in the middle of something that needs a beginning and an end.

    I'm still in awe that you only started composing so recently, you're so talented!

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    Ha, don't make me blush. I'm not done. Have to develop it further. The beginning is like that for some Classical. But I was wondering myself. Yeah the countdown is annoying. It was a new movie Maker program on my phone.
    Last edited by Phil loves classical; Apr-18-2018 at 02:19.
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    Here is my completed orchestral piece. over 4 minutes a new record for me! I threw in the title and sea concept last minute, and had nothing to do with the conception.

    Tweaked version.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Here is my completed orchestral piece. over 4 minutes a new record for me! I threw in the title and sea concept last minute, and had nothing to do with the conception.

    Seemed a bit repetitive, but I really liked the part around 110. Cool piece!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    Seemed a bit repetitive, but I really liked the part around 110. Cool piece!
    I think the crescendo part could use more variation.
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    (i'd love to get your points on the latest two pieces I've posted in my thread, btw)

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    Here is a piece I was working on since yesterday, which Capeditea gave me an idea on. Using a mathematical sequence for a series of notes, and just arranging them.

    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Here is a piece I was working on since yesterday, which Capeditea gave me an idea on. Using a mathematical sequence for a series of notes, and just arranging them.



    Cool. I like it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    Cool. I like it!
    Just don't use it in training your ear for traditional harmony there is an intentional wrong note (the 3rd note in the piece) in the clarinet part that gets repeated. Prokofiev also put intentional "wrong notes". I'll never hear the end of it from Nikola.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Just don't use it in training your ear for traditional harmony there is an intentional wrong note (the 3rd note in the piece) in the clarinet part that gets repeated. Prokofiev also put intentional "wrong notes". I'll never hear the end of it from Nikola.
    The problem is that you're often using wrong notes when you believe that you're using right notes.

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