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    Inspired by "Amazing Grace" and "Nearer my God to thee"
    I composed this orchestral piece starting very simple with piano.

    I'd like to know what you think of it:

    https://soundcloud.com/mediumaevum-artist/remembrance

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    Sounds nice to me. I would vary the left hand broken chords accompaniment to start on different base notes in subsequent chords to have a running bass line. I think integrating the piano with orchestra in the middle at some point would be nice, along some more development further from the tonic chord.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Sounds nice to me. I would vary the left hand broken chords accompaniment to start on different base notes in subsequent chords to have a running bass line. I think integrating the piano with orchestra in the middle at some point would be nice, along some more development further from the tonic chord.
    I updated my track. Would you like to listen again?
    Last edited by mediumaevum; Mar-15-2018 at 14:45.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mediumaevum View Post
    I updated my track. Would you like to listen again?
    sure, of course
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    The transition from piano to orchestra feels a bit uneven; a lack of bass that the piano was providing just feels cut out. I would keep the piano in the middle of the piece, like phil said.

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