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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    That's good. It was definitely tighter and more composed.
    Thanks for the critique!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    Hey, that's quite moody sounding. Brings back some nostalgic memories. I don't quite like the progression to the more predictable chord at 0:50 or the right hand part from 1:30 to 2:00. But it seems you've pushed yourself well further than usual.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Hey, that's quite moody sounding. Brings back some nostalgic memories. I don't quite like the progression to the more predictable chord at 0:50 or the right hand part from 1:30 to 2:00. But it seems you've pushed yourself well further than usual.
    Isn't most of my stuff quite moody?

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    Try this one too. It has some interesting changes in it!

    "Alien Porridge"
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TIkE_sARnho
    Last edited by Captainnumber36; Jun-12-2020 at 04:05.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    Isn't most of my stuff quite moody?
    Maybe moodiness is a personal thing and I don't usually find it moody.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Maybe moodiness is a personal thing and I don't usually find it moody.
    Fair enough.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    Try this one too. It has some interesting changes in it!

    "Alien Porridge"
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TIkE_sARnho
    Can't say I find this one very interesting, haha, sorry . It just a 4 note melody over to a pretty predictable chord pattern, and then a shift to a couple of dissonant chords on the right hand with a more conventional chord on left and a few notes back and forth. I don't feel you've created something out of the individual elements, unlike Scars.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    Can't say I find this one very interesting, haha, sorry . It just a 4 note melody over to a pretty predictable chord pattern, and then a shift to a couple of dissonant chords on the right hand with a more conventional chord on left and a few notes back and forth. I don't feel you've created something out of the individual elements, unlike Scars.
    I just really like when the blues progression goes to the B and the D chord section a whole lot. Rhythmically, it is all over the place too. Lots of changes in feels!
    Last edited by Captainnumber36; Jun-12-2020 at 04:31.

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    But no one will be intrigued by all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Captainnumber36 View Post
    That's good. It has stronger form and melody, with minimal repetition. And definitely goes somewhere.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phil loves classical View Post
    That's good. It has stronger form and melody, with minimal repetition. And definitely goes somewhere.

    Thanks sir Phil.

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