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    I just released my first Symphony on my YouTube channel.
    I would like to hear your opinion and feedback. Thank you!

    Here are the links to single movements or the whole Symphony:
    1. Movement: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gtq8...DjeHS25O_Hfu4m
    2. Movement: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OaaU...DjeHS25O_Hfu4m
    3. Movement: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_QF..._Hfu4m&index=3
    4. Movement: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DqE...DjeHS25O_Hfu4m
    Full Symphony: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dM0Ibe9v_tQ

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    I think you'd have more luck if you posted this on Today's Composer's subforum. I would try to integrate the melodic lines together more. They are sort of fragmented. It sounds like you have given the chords a clear higher priority than the melody, when they should flow more naturally. You're not using counterpoint principles. Even in Modern non traditional harmony, certain counterpoint rules should be used at least as a guide.
    Last edited by Phil loves classical; Jun-13-2018 at 04:36.
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    Thank you for your feedback.

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    The first track had pretty solid counterpoint, actually. It was some moments on the other tracks.
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