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    Hey guys, I'm 15 and I love making music so I finished this first draft of my first piano sonata. I completed this draft around a few weeks ago and I thought I would upload it to youtube. I rushed the ending so the Coda isn't that good and also the transition back into the tonic for the recapitulation isn't that good but I'll change that. Again, this is a first draft so I rushed a few parts and they may seem really awkward (planning to change that). If you could comment some constructive critisism that would be great.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54LjQOfmNlA

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    Well I enjoyed it. This is the first movement right?
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    It could be a work by the young Beethoven - I mean that. I like it a lot, especially the quirky theme and what you do with it. Bravo!

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    Hey, I enjoyed that! Thanks for posting. But yeah, a bit more coda would be nice. And don't forget the next two or three movements!


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    Yes it is the first movement. I plan to create 3. The first movement is fast, second slow and 3rd faster.

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