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    Default My non-traditional compositions

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    My most liked composition so far is For Cello

    My most recent attempt is Four simple slow episodes for string sextet.

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    The sextet sounds great. I thought the sonorities were really nice, and it was moody. The cello piece has a nice melodic line. I would like to hear larger and more sudden changes in dynamics. It sounds like you're using a continuous meter, I think it would be nice to inject some more jarring rhythms, even though I think you want to achieve a pastoral sort of feel.
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    I've been trying to create a personal set of counterpoint rules. This is one attempt.

    https://soundcloud.com/richannes-wra...iola-and-cello

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    A very tonal introduction for a String Quartet I might expand.

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    do you have any scores? Midi is unbearable

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    It's moody and has nice harmony. I'm thinking the cello shouldn't go up to the treble in bar 18. The bass sounds like it just disappears suddenly. I think the melody shifts between the viola and cello too suddenly and with too large a leap without a smooth transition, which sounds awkward to me.
    Last edited by Phil loves classical; Jan-19-2020 at 19:29.
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    Another tonal intro for a string quartet.

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