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    Hi!

    I've almost finished my composition and just thought I'd share it with you guys.
    Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

    I really value ideas on how to improve my piece.

    Cheers!


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    Hi

    I like your piece.

    I think it maybe could use a little variability in tempo, the odd rit etc. I thought there were a few places where a slight holding back in tempo could be effective.

    Cheers

    Adrien

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    It's gorgeous and full of emotion. Very well done

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    Sounds nice. Try adding more rhythmic variation on the right hand part of the piano.
    "Forgive me, Majesty. I'm a vulgar man. But I assure you, my music is not.“ Mozart

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    Thank you, guys!

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    I agree with Phil, but other than that, it's really good!

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