my bands first song

i got a guitar for christmas so hadnt been playiing piano much but got basic scales memorized and finally got my fingers strong enuf to play the notes well.
trying 2 write some songs together with my friends after school and kinda improvised a bit with some scales and we came up with this song

my dads phone was almost dead so we had to do it in one take, which kinda sucked but i think it turned out pretty well overall, our bass player had 2 many wine coolers and zoned out half way into it lol

LMK what you guys think
-should we get rid of the halloweeny sounding stuff in the middle?
-is the guitar solo too quiet in the mix?
-i swear the rhythm is doing some like 17/16 time signature while everything else is in 4/4? again, too many wine coolers

make sure you listen on descent headphones or speakers bkuz its not gonna sound any good on laptop or phone : /